Fire Fist & The Greatest Swordsman

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Fire Fist & The Greatest Swordsman

Post by YinYangSplit on 16th April 2013, 4:26 am

Damn, I keep forgetting to post my stuff here.
Fire Fist:

The Greatest Swordsman:
Before you go correcting me on grammar, I intended for it to be called "Swordsman", not "Swordsmen". Just making that clear Razz
Both of these were requests from dA...but I'm not too happy with the way the swordsmen one turned out...I might remake it later on.
But yeah, comment please?

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Re: Fire Fist & The Greatest Swordsman

Post by Rhino.Freak on 16th April 2013, 5:04 am

wow, you became really better! +1..

first one gets 8/10 (text is too weird at places)

second gets 10/10 from me.. it looks fabulous! Thumbs up!

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Re: Fire Fist & The Greatest Swordsman

Post by pack5642 on 16th April 2013, 5:32 am

so the ace one has awesome text but the bg and the render dont go well together. i actually like the swordsman one, apart from the weird colors. each swordsman wouldve looked better on his own.

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Re: Fire Fist & The Greatest Swordsman

Post by AWSAN.awesome on 16th April 2013, 6:54 am

woah,i hate you Razz +1!

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Re: Fire Fist & The Greatest Swordsman

Post by YinYangSplit on 16th April 2013, 11:15 pm

@Pack Yeah, that was the main problem, it's too colorful. (Curse you Zoro for not wearing red Mad) but the request was all three of them, so...colorful it was! OTL And for Ace...I had made a bg that suited it more, but it didn't look that good, so I took the layer off. (It was sort of a smudge style bg) Thanks btw Razz
@Rhino wow, 10/10! Thanks Rhino Very Happy I assume you mean the "C" from Ace? And maybe the curliness of "Portgas"? Ah well, text hates me Razz
@Awsan Thanks, and don't worry, the hatred is mutual Twisted Evil (JK Razz)

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