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Post by YinYangSplit on 30th May 2013, 5:55 am

This is an unfinished sig:

But, I'm kinda stuck. Any suggestions/critiques on what I can do to improve it? Please? (Btw, it's supposed to be a dark city and Toshiro is popping out of it. sort of like a portal i guess. White Sparrows are there for a reference)

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Re: Toshiro something-or-other

Post by Draox on 30th May 2013, 7:54 am

first,you have to focus on render =_= then BG, i can tell you stuck in making BG =_="

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Re: Toshiro something-or-other

Post by YinYangSplit on 31st May 2013, 2:59 am

Yeah, I got the render done. The background is kinda...not done. It feels empty but I don't know what else to add to it without overcrowding it. I dunno, maybe I'll just leave the background as-is and just add the finishing touches...

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Re: Toshiro something-or-other

Post by Draox on 31st May 2013, 3:16 am

you can use scenary as BG (wallpaper)

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Re: Toshiro something-or-other

Post by pack5642 on 31st May 2013, 6:43 am

u can tone down all the blue in the portal, its too bright and is soo bright u cant see any details in the bg.

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Re: Toshiro something-or-other

Post by AWSAN.awesome on 31st May 2013, 1:51 pm

Too bright, the blue effects are all I can see, the city isnt really visible, I don't know y u added the birds..
The signature looks weird..Text is awesome..
With little of fixing it will be really awesome..
Good luck!

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Re: Toshiro something-or-other

Post by YinYangSplit on 31st May 2013, 8:56 pm

Yeah, I'm going to redo the portal's size so more of the city is visible, and try to tone down the brightness. Thanks guys for the suggestions Very Happy
@Awsan the birds are a Billy Talent reference. Razz

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Re: Toshiro something-or-other

Post by Draox on 31st May 2013, 9:26 pm

my friend outcome using that render


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Re: Toshiro something-or-other

Post by YinYangSplit on 31st May 2013, 10:02 pm

It's a nice outcome, but not really what I'm going for. Thanks anyways though, it might give me some inspiration later on Very Happy

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Re: Toshiro something-or-other

Post by A-MAN on 1st June 2013, 3:27 am

A really cool one Yin! +1 (the 99th rep!!)
@Draox: Yin's is much more stylish Evil or Very Mad

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Post by AWSAN.awesome on 1st June 2013, 4:41 am

Totally agreed, yin's is more st=ylish XD

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Re: Toshiro something-or-other

Post by YinYangSplit on 1st June 2013, 5:13 am

Woohoo, style points! Razz
So this is the first "Finished" version I made. I dimmed it a bit, made the portal smaller, and got rid of a lot of blue.

What do you guys think?

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Re: Toshiro something-or-other

Post by Draox on 1st June 2013, 5:53 am

Your outcome less flow =_= than my friend outcome and less depth,lighting wrong, white effect around render you put too much =_=, his text better than yours,this look better than the first one.

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Post by YinYangSplit on 2nd June 2013, 1:30 am

Damn, forgot the lighting again. 🤦
As for flow...it's not easy making a city background flow Razz The white effect is supposed to be like a portal thing, so if I made it smaller, it wouldn't look like one, and as for the text..his is kinda plain. Well, I guess I'll try to fix the lighting, flow, and depth then.

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Post by Draox on 2nd June 2013, 3:44 am

flow not only come from BG =_=

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Post by YinYangSplit on 3rd June 2013, 3:14 am

...yeah, but it's most noticeable when the bg doesn't have flow. Oh well. I'll fix it when I have time

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Post by Draox on 3rd June 2013, 4:18 pm

you can use pen tool to create flow =_=

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Post by YinYangSplit on 3rd June 2013, 11:37 pm

Which was what I originally did, but was told that there were too many blue effects, so I removed them Razz Anyways, I'll probably leave it as-is, i'll remember all this for my next sig, thanks Very Happy

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