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Luffy Grizzly Magnum

Post by -|Mark975|- on 3rd January 2014, 7:37 am

As the title says Luffy's Grizzly Magnum (still a W.I.P)...

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Re: Luffy Grizzly Magnum

Post by ULTIMOS on 4th January 2014, 12:03 am

really nice, but isn't the part where he holds his arms backwards supposed to be longer? and the part where he hits the guy shorter with him holding the poze and quaking a bit? other than that its really good

P.S. why is his face purple?

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Re: Luffy Grizzly Magnum

Post by -|Mark975|- on 4th January 2014, 12:32 am

You know its an animation right? Haha if it was in the game then well yeah of course it would be longer and all that. Purple face? What are you on about?

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Re: Luffy Grizzly Magnum

Post by ULTIMOS on 4th January 2014, 3:05 am

while hes charging his face should be only slightly darker, but you used entirely different colors and it looks like hes trying to poo

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Re: Luffy Grizzly Magnum

Post by AWSAN.awesome on 4th January 2014, 5:13 am

I think it's pretty amazing, just make the pulling backwards longer, cause now I feel like the attack has no great impact like it's supposed to be. Great job & KIU Smile

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Re: Luffy Grizzly Magnum

Post by -|Mark975|- on 4th January 2014, 8:57 am

@Ultimos
Dude I don't know where you got purple from but his face colour is fine throughout the whole animation... :/

@Awsan
Maybe effects would make it more better but thanks man Smile.

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